#1
I started writing this, but kind of ran out of steam fast. Also, i dont know how to really write a chorus so i need a little help. a good chorus will help with the title

The king is stuck / inside of his room
in front of his door / there sits a goon
who lurks in the shadows / and cant come too soon
its the kings friend, temptation

The next thing you know / the townspeople cry
why must all of / the poor children die
so the kings henchman / comes out with a lie
"those are the rules of creation"
#2
A king on his thrown cries in fear
Temptations come and go no matter what you hear
Seeing the consequences of his reign
Through sorrow and shame he knows his end will be near

I think it fits with what your composing.
My life Won't Be Another Regret
Last edited by andrewneier at Apr 29, 2008,