#1
These are the lyrics to a song I'm writing for my band. Its either a joke or protest song depending on how you look at it. I'd love to know how you intemperate it!

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Walk the line, take the time like you know you should
use your voice and not your fist
Show your pride, hold your head up high
party like a communist

Take whats thrown at you and never complain
remember everything thats said
Show intelligence and good discussion
but don't you dare use your head

How are we supposed to keep in balance
when theres no ground in between?
Expected to question everything
and expected to get no answers back

We're stuck between the middle and the start
and drawn on a leash
We try so hard but only go so far
told to practice what we preach

<Solo!>

No job, no pay, no car, no say
No love, no hate, no thought, no fate
No-one to hear us sing, to hear us yell
But we're told to believe in ourselves

We are teenagers
destined to indifference
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You're just another brick in the wall
#2
Very nice, I see it as a protest song. I thought that

'party like a communist'

Didnt fit with the rest of the stanza. You have some good rhymes here, your lyrics remind me of Skyclad a little bit (thats not a bad thing). Overall this is a really cool song. C4C? - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=849421
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#3
I see it as a teenager protest....

but part like a communist doesn't make sense...you could use other words to make it rhyme with fist..like list...
#4
Quote by Bradshaw Moody
I see it as a teenager protest....

but part like a communist doesn't make sense...you could use other words to make it rhyme with fist..like list...


Quote by Bal_Sagoth
Very nice, I see it as a protest song. I thought that

'party like a communist'

Didnt fit with the rest of the stanza. You have some good rhymes here, your lyrics remind me of Skyclad a little bit (thats not a bad thing). Overall this is a really cool song. C4C? - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=849421


I see what your both saying, but I really like that line. I'd probably change the other one so it linked that line in.
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You're just another brick in the wall