#1
I just found this song that i wrote a while ago. Let me know what you think.


We own multi bedroom homes
And wear hundred dollar clothes
We eat 5 meals everyday
And believe that it’s okay

The fire’s growing bigger
A flood of flames raging higher

We won’t stop the fire
We stoke it with our greed
Unless we light a match on our hearts
They’ll be blood on our hands

They have beaten battered homes
And own one pair of clothes
National Geographic stars
Our response shows who we really are

This fire’s growing bigger
A flood of flames raging higher

We won’t stop the burning
We stoke it with our greed
Unless we light a match on our hearts
They’ll be blood on our hands

All the children running around
Struggling to survive
All the children cryin’ loud
”Who is on our side?”


Thanks.
nothing to see here
#3
like it
mostly because of the message
its executed pretty well
just make some adjustments
if theres anything you feel should be change
change it
you could always go back if you don't like what you wrote
you can only make it better