Good try, seems like your holding back with your vocals a little.

You've got a nice husky, mellow voice, really airy and I love that, just bring it out more

Some of the harmonies were really very nice, some of them weren't all that great too though, out of tune and wrong vocal pitching.

Overall I think it's a nice start, I think some work does need to be done though.

Please crit mine : https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=849706

Thanks, Martin