#1
Its a but unfinished but i think what i have so far is alright... But thats just my opinion.

Its in my profile

Also if anyone can tell me what genre this is? I don't really know. Its not influenced by anything, its just something i made up on the spot and i thought it sounded alright.

EDIT: I just listened to it again and i noticed its really unfinished. If you guys like it I'll finish it but if you all think its crap i guess I'll just delete it.
#2
Quote by Amundeik
It's pretty good, but the guitar is fuzzy and has crap sound, and it sometimes drowns in the rest of the music. I somhow feel I have heard it before. Is the backing made in Guitar Pro?

I'll say you should continue making the song, this is the way you learn!
Keep on the good work!



The guitar track was recorded poorly i know but im working on that.

Also i found out the chord progression is used alot in pop punk and rock

Ah well

Thanks
#3
hey, i found the guitar track to be recorded in reasonable quality, but i found the drums to be annoying (unless you intended for them to be like this) as in the high-hat wasn't used constantly. Otherwise the track has potential. Try and finish it, then show us it again.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=840371

thanks.
#4
Quote by AwesomeDrummer
hey, i found the guitar track to be recorded in reasonable quality, but i found the drums to be annoying (unless you intended for them to be like this) as in the high-hat wasn't used constantly. Otherwise the track has potential. Try and finish it, then show us it again.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=840371

thanks.


Thanks im not realy a drummer so i did what i could with guitar pro and i know its a pretty crappy beat.

Il crit yours in a sec.
#5
I like where its going I think you should keep the guitar in a little longer in the begining there. Now obviously you'll need to add atleast 2 or 3 more parts maybe a solo and I think it can be a good song. I actually thought the guitar tone worked for the music it just sounds like a fuzz pedal to me....

Crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=851008
#6
Quote by Osiris77
I like where its going I think you should keep the guitar in a little longer in the begining there. Now obviously you'll need to add atleast 2 or 3 more parts maybe a solo and I think it can be a good song. I actually thought the guitar tone worked for the music it just sounds like a fuzz pedal to me....

Crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=851008


Im planning on redoing the guitar

Il crit yours in a sec
#8
sounds a bit like hair metal to me, but i like some of those hair metal bands, and the guitar tone isn't too bad for the song just make sure the rest is consistently hollow for the intro( I assume that's what this is) c4c i have something on my profile, thanks


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