#1
This is a song I wrote around a literal event, which can be taken as a sort of relationship. I'm aware I'm not the best writer, so constructive critiquing would be great.


Yeahhhhh
I ran into you
like a run away train
your looks just amaze me
and then you called me crazy
but sometimes i dont know
how anything works
yeah, i know you avail me
but its good for me

I ran into you
like a run away train
First you took my breathe away
then you took the rest of me-
but i can't walk away
so now we're standin still
just the place you want to be
you just cant hold on to me

Yeahhhhh
I ran into you
like a run away train
your looks just amaze me
and then you called me crazy
but sometimes i dont know
how anything works
yeah, i know you avail me
but its good for me

Its all a blur
the way its all went down
but as long as your next to me
its not gunna be easy
And i think you noticed
all of my pain
i tired to hide it
i guess you go abide it

I ran into you
like a run away train
First you took my breathe away
then you took the rest of me-
but i can't walk away
so now we're standin still
just the place you want to be
you just cant hold on to me

Sometimes when your here
i can feel like a man
all you do is worry
thats all i got within me
as i lay to die
your the only one around
i wish this could be different
i guess we cant change that

Yeahhhhh
I ran into you
like a run away train
your looks just amaze me
and then you called me crazy
but sometimes i dont know
how anything works
yeah, i know you avail me
but its good for me

I ran into you
like a run away train
First you took my breathe away
then you took the rest of me-
but i can't walk away
so now we're standin still
just the place you want to be
you just cant hold on to me
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#3
Ya its was hard to put some soul into it. I kind of just wrote it, with no inspiration, which I hate doing.
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