#1
Yea say your prayer for me
Take your memories
Save your subtleties
Hello misery
Hello company
Say a prayer for me
In my memory

All these fantasies
All these memories
All these lonely nights
All these raging fights
Goodbye tonight
Goodbye light

Say a prayer for me
Shove your memories
Save your subtleties
Hello misery
Hello company
Say your prayer for me
And your memories

All these fantasies
All these memories
All these lonely nights
All these raging fights
Goodbye tonight
Goodbye light

Have a taste of what's to come true
Yeah cause we're through
Damn this place of you
Damn these things we won't do
Goodbye misery
Goodbye sympathy
For infinity it's true
Someday I'll find the rest of you
#2
wow... deep... nicely written
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#3
Farewell
Yea say your prayer for me
Take your memories
Save your subtleties
Hello misery
Hello company
Say a prayer for me
In my memory

Well stating the obvious typo, apart from that it's very nice I don't usually like the same end rhyme for an entire stanza but here it's original and works. One thing though maybe change the last to sentences so that you don't repeat them.

All these fantasies
All these memories
All these lonely nights
All these raging fights
Goodbye tonight
Goodbye light

Nothing wrong here maybe you could use another word instead of "memories" seeing as the previous stanza uses it too.

Say a prayer for me
Shove your memories
Save your subtleties
Hello misery
Hello company
Say your prayer for me
And your memories

All these fantasies
All these memories
All these lonely nights
All these raging fights
Goodbye tonight
Goodbye light

Have a taste of what's to come true
Yeah cause we're through
Damn this place of you
Damn these things we won't do
Goodbye misery
Goodbye sympathy
For infinity it's true
Someday I'll find the rest of you

Again everything works except I would use the entire word "because" instead of "cause" the extra syllables help the flow.

Overall it was alright, nearly everything flowed well a few minor things could be changed.

Care to criticize mine ?

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