We're planning on re-recording these as well as record some new tunes.

I've decided to post these not for general critique, but mainly on how we can improve these recordings and other general production notes that we should bare in mind when recording these.

thanks, will critique in return.
my suggestion on recording "Failure of a Star" is to lower the vocals a little, lower the lead guitar a little (it over powers the rhythm too much in my opinion), and bring up the bass because u can barely tell that you have a bassist.

PS: the solo in that song is really good

And for "Sleazy", i like it just how it is but the bass still needs to be raised up a little.

Critique mine?
Last edited by jibgilmon at May 3, 2008,