#1
Just an idea for a first verse to a song. I imagine it with a somewhat mellow guitar riff.. but predominately drums and bass. Think Muse/acoustic Foo. Anyways, here's the lyrics.

When I wake up every morning it's a mystery play
All the things that I have loved are dwindling away
So I'll try to explain it in an elaborate way
I want to live and die before my hair turns gray

I'm just living my life so, what can I say
I drink every night and I smoke weed every day
and it could be your last, so why delay?
it's all a beautiful lie that, here I portray
#3
thats cool man! just my opinion but i think " i drink all night and i smoke all day" flows better in my mind! but hey who am i eh?