#1
I was listening to Tender Surrender by Steve Vai and noticed how peaceful it was, I tried to do something like it, check out my page, it should be either old school 1 or old school 2, they both work, just different effects.
#2
was your guitar out of tune by any chance?
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Sorry, you got me excited when I read Steve Vai in the title. But you need alot more practice, either your guitar was out of tune here or your just hitting off notes. Keep trying tho

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#5
Yea, my guitar strings are old, I moved to a small town revently so I can't fnid a way to get any new ones.

But, yes I know I need more practice, and thanks for the comments.
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Sorry, you got me excited when I read Steve Vai in the title. But you need alot more practice, either your guitar was out of tune here or your just hitting off notes. Keep trying tho


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#7
That 'Steve Vai' tag is really good advertisement... you should try that when going major.

But seriously, it very... atonal. If there were backing instruments or something going on in the background, I would dig it, but really sounds off.
Honestly, just keep practicing, and coming up with new ideas and I'm sure that there'll be a great tune coming out of that.

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