#1
I wrote this really quickly, but it just kind of came out and I think it flows nicely. I have lyrics and everything but I couldn't do a vocal track because it's all screamed obviously.
Attachments:
lose yourself.zip
#2
it shows you know what you're doing, although I feel the lead stuff is so overused that I got rather sick of it in the end. Let the lead guitar play something else (and may it just be doubling the rhythm guitar) once in a while, like maybe octave chords (then you're on your way to Thrice-dom), and reserve the Lead pattern for climax parts so it has more impact when it comes.
#3
it was almost perfect. the one problem was the drums at 13 and all other places with the similar beat. I don't know why, but it just feels like the beat is lost at that point. I was havin a hard time tapping along with my foot. I think it might be the offbeat snare hits but I'm not sure.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...