#1
I've been awakened by this dream of outrage
And i think that i can't get out of this cage
The bars are strong and all the fait is lost
I want to escape, but my soul is what it costs

Two ways to go and none of them is right
Anger boils inside of me, we need to start a fight
Fight of black and white, this is a riot!
My arms are heavy, but i won't be quiet


From black to white, from night to light
Tyranny's going down,it's time for renown
This is the time to rise against!

Revitalizing of outrage
It's the time for the big stage
Engage the new world!
We'll mold the new world!


The power is back in me, i'll break away
Now i am the hunter, no longer the prey
All the sky is on fire, the sun is with us
We'll win this, we'll clean up this mess

The chains are broken and we have spoken
The monsters are down and the path is open
A change is what we needed, now we have it
We'll not fade in time, we'll not lose again


From black to white, from night to light
Tyranny's going down,it's time for renown
This is the time to rise against!

Revitalizing of outrage
It's the time for the big stage
Engage the new world!
We'll mold the new world!

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#2
i like it, except for the "we need to start a fight" parrt. that was a little cliche, but all in all, good job.
Quote by NGD1313
Well I don't know about solos but how about that Smoke on the Water riff. It's like...impossible.


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I'm Jake. I'm a musician, philosopher, and exhibitionist.