#1
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6518096

THere were a lot of mistakes when changin from a riff to the other, but this was pretty much improvised. Except for some stuff i added with recording software.

Like in the solo they changed to a rhythm thing and I could not end it correctly.

Anyways, what do you guys think of the composition, and the solo.

I put this in the recording forum but it seems to be dead.
#2
it sounds very messy
A hero of war, Yeah that's what I'll be

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#3
Yeah we still have to put a lot of more work on it. We have to sit down, and see how many times each riff is played and stuff. The mic also ruins the tone badly.

Thanks for the critique though. I really appreciate it.
#4
Aside from the horrible audio quality, the song is decent but there's no dynamics, its all very straight-edge.
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#5
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Aside from the horrible audio quality, the song is decent but there's no dynamics, its all very straight-edge.


We are gonna have lyrics there to add that power touch.
#6
If it was better quality, I would probably say it was good, but I couldn't tell. Sorry.
#7
sounds like one goes going faster than some others and the sog itself sucks