#1
this is a new song that ive been throwing around at band practices (almost everyday), we want to finish it up, we have guitar riffs, licks, and a solo that we have worked out, our bassist is a bit confused, and the drummer has some fills. what does UG think? our band is called Underrated, feel free to book us in the tri-state. the words in parentheses are not positivly going to stay. this is going to be C4C


itd be great to start again
itd be great my friend, if this wasnt the end
itd be great if i never lied
and if i never worried or saw you cry
but i did and part of me died
like they say, i should swallow my pride

am i gunna make it after all?
have i lost myself this time?
what the **** (hell) was i thinking?
our ships sinking, down the port side
what should i say before we capsize?

its not done
its just at a standstill
what (the ****)!? have you lost all your ****ing will?
well rise up, after this is done
but untill that time, im sorry, i have to move on

am i gunna make it after all?
have i lost myself this time?
what the ****(hell) was i thinking?
our ships sinking, down the port side
what should i say before we capsize?

(instrimentals to close)
HiMyNameIsMatt
#5
really solid dude. My one thing I have always felt, ( no offense) is that good lyrics can have curses in them, but great lyricists find better words then curses. they were good, solid scheme, but think about my point before.

keep up the good work.
Originally posted by J_Dizzle
THAAAANK YOU GoodCharloteSux is god