#1
Heres a song I wrote a while ago, its about a guy thats falling for a girl and the only part of him that isn't floating is his body. Kinda cool, I dont know, but I really like the guitar in it its fun to play. Ill C4C anybody if they want it

Called gravity in my profile
#2
Nice song and cool lyrics. Like the 'poppiness' of it. Finally, you've got a good voice.
It's gonna be a blue day
#3
By finally, you've got a good voice -- do you mean that I have finally developed a good voice, or do you mean it like; And my last point, you have a good voice. ?

Sorry, just confused, Thankyou.
#4
i like the proggression. rather jazzy. vocals were pretty good, but the could use some work. you have a tendancy to go a bit out of key at the end of each line. it seems to be a breathing problem. i also thought that you might back off the reverb, since you only have two tracks.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=853303
Too cool for a signature.
#5
I dig the sound of your acoustic man... Nicely done..
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#6
Quote by |2eM!x
By finally, you've got a good voice -- do you mean that I have finally developed a good voice, or do you mean it like; And my last point, you have a good voice. ?

Sorry, just confused, Thankyou.


Yeah, it was my last point.
It's gonna be a blue day
#8
Hey nice Tune!

I like the vocal tone and the sound of your acoustic

can you tell me about your guitar model and how you recorded it?

Thks
#9
cool song! howd you record dude? btw do you have a mitchell accoustic? mines is a mitchell and it sounds exactly like yours xD
#10
I have an ovation celebrity acoustic, im glad you all enjoy it! I have an AKG perception 200 microphone, and a M-Audio soundtrack pro that everything plugs into. I record with live 7.01
#12
sounds good


Quote by Gabel
You are EXTREMELY WRONG! I have played it. I own an 18W and it would be an awful stereo amp, it's way too bright, breaks up too easily and so on. Secondly, why would a guitar store sell an hifi amp.