#1
This is the first song I've shown on this site. Me and a friend just started working on this. Please be honest on what you think about it. Its still not finished yet ill post up the lyrics once there offically done.


Tread the steel on down the road
Pray to god he’ll never show
The shadow screaming into the distance
Howls at for his heart this is his repentance

The criminal they made for you
Victim of asylum number 22
The dog that calls your every whim
Look out they’re about to come t

Chorus:
Rising from the pits of hell
Here to spread his mortal spell
This psychotic cage he dug away
Is what come home to every day

You want to scream but his eyes command
Turn to run but its under his hand
You hear the chasing in your head
You can listen to him moan as he rips your flesh

Chorus
Quote by metalcore123
I hate trying to cover up my cheese in school because the bimbo next to me dislikes the smell of pure love.

I'm bringing farts back!
Last edited by SoftParade1967 at May 6, 2008,
#3
Quote by andy331
thats pretty good actually i like it


thanks man! anything i should do diffrently? any suggestions?
Quote by metalcore123
I hate trying to cover up my cheese in school because the bimbo next to me dislikes the smell of pure love.

I'm bringing farts back!