#1
Sorry

(Verse)
a million days go by
a million smiles i fake
alone i stand deserted in this life that i can’t take
the people pass me by
as i just sit and think
there’s gotta be something wrong with me
wrong with ME....

(Chorus)
i’m sorry for everything
i didn’t do for you
sorry i can’t be the person that you want me to
sorry that i’m so cold
in everything i do
but something in my heart just tells me i can’t trust you

no i can’t trust you

(Verse)
what the hell is wrong with me
is the question on my mind
tho it seems so hard to try and find these answers
i’m sick and tired of trying
to be the one they want me to
i need to live to please my self...
and stop trying to please YOU

(Chorus)
i’m sorry for everything
i didn’t do for you
sorry i can’t be the person that you want me to
sorry that i’m so cold
in everything i do
but something in my heart just tells me i can’t trust you

no i can’t trust you

i’m not a perfect person
i’m not a perfect person
i’m far from being perfect
i’m feeling so deserted
i’m not a perfect person
i’m not a perfect person
i’m far from being perfect
sometimes i feel so worthless

(Chorus)
i’m sorry for everything
i didn’t do for you
sorry i can’t be the person that you want me to
sorry that i’m so cold
in everything i do
but something in my heart just tells me i can’t trust you

no i can’t trust you
no i can’t trust you
i’m ruthless to you
because i can’t trust you......
#2
Well for starters I wouldn't title anything I write "Sorry". To me it's cliched... And I dunno about the "I'm not a perfect person" being repeated like that of course don;t know how the song goes. Other than that I like the verses alot and the chorus is cool. Good work
#3
bro, when I was reading this I totally thought Of Linkin park Singing it.

Good job.


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S m 0 0 k e w e e d & Live life bro.