ok for the first minute it sounds like ur just playing nothing sounds like when i put my guitar down on the bed while the volume is still up

minute 1-2 we have actually started making notes, but its all to muddy, and i take it ur not using a proper microphone to do this as everything sounds like a big blur

Now we return back to that drone note

the riff in the 3 minute mark sound quiet good and can be turned into something if properly sorted out