#1
Now your alone, somewhere in your self belief
Start to fight your own, words that spread us apart
This new season of cold, won't beat the heat, of my heart
I want to tell you, I never wanted you, to leave me

(Chorus)
I'm gonna know
There is no more places I could run
But I knew a place I could run
When she was, in my arms


I see her again, thinking about her choice's
I'm still waiting for your phone call
Maybe this time i'm gonna wait to hear
Her breath in the mic, so i can relax my tears

[Chorus]
I'm gonna know
There is no more places I could run
But I knew a place I could run
When she was, in my arms
#2
This new season of cold, won't beat the heat of my heart

Very good imagery and idea in place there, the rest of it seems bland, overused and simple. Work not so much on your imagery but your ideas, It's almost all been said before. It's how you make your take on it, and the chorus, with the run/run thing... is... annoying, no offence.

Listen to some Death Cab For Cutie and possibly The Spill Canvas both of those bands do love songs brilliantly, SC does it a little more cliche-esque but they both manage to stay away from the obvious ideas and instead change it and makei t work like pure genius.

Good luck.

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