#1
Last night i stayed up late
thinking about you
and all the things we used to do

and i tried real hard
to figure where this all went wrong
but i found that i
am living a lie

so i tried to cry
but everything is broken
on the inside

i read those letters you wrote to me
never thought you'd sound so happy
it's almost been a year
but i'm still right here

i tell myself it's not me fault
but it really is
these past 10 months
have felt like years

CHORUS:
but its almost summer time
and again i wish you could be mine, girl
i'm sorry for the pain i caused
it's not your fault, it's my lose

and i beat myself up constantly
because you're not here with me, girl
oh i swear to God, i have changed
i hope this is not in vain

i said that i loved you
now i know that i was true
this hole inside my heart
is slowly making me fall apart

sitting here alone
where the hell did we go wrong
got this feeling inside my chest
that keeps taking away my breath

i'm staring out the window of this train
trying to put an end to this pain
six feet's so far down
but maybe six feet's all i got left

Chorus

outro
#4
Quote by wyoming_soldier
Last night i stayed up late
thinking about you
and all the things we used to do

and i tried real hard
to figure where this all went wrong
but i found that i
am living a lie

so i tried to cry
but everything is broken
on the inside

i read those letters you wrote to me
never thought you'd sound so happy
it's almost been a year
but i'm still right here

i tell myself it's not me fault
but it really is
these past 10 months
have felt like years


CHORUS:
but its almost summer time
and again i wish you could be mine, girl
i'm sorry for the pain i caused
it's not your fault, it's my lose


and i beat myself up constantly
because you're not here with me, girl
oh i swear to God, i have changed
i hope this is not in vain

i said that i loved you
now i know that i was true
this hole inside my heart
is slowly making me fall apart

sitting here alone
where the hell did we go wrong
got this feeling inside my chest
that keeps taking away my breath

i'm staring out the window of this train
trying to put an end to this pain
six feet's so far down
but maybe six feet's all i got left

I like the last two lines.

Chorus

outro


The underlines are cliches. A mean thing for me to do? Yeah. I know it's so, so easy to fall in to them with love songs but I think you should have another go at this. I'd write down all of your ideas in conversational language and write out the last lines and try to think of other ways to get there.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!