Its a real chilled song that blends with some heavy riffs......its a 5 minute song i think you guys will enjoy it
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Liked the opening chords. I thought the melody line didn't really fit with it though. It sounds like you gone from the pedal straight to the computer for the distortion tone. I used to that, but I never liked it as it was fuzzy for my liking. It starts to get boring during the middle as it becomes very repetitive.
Overall, not a great track. Also, try adding a bass and drums if you can as it improve the sound drastically.

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