#1
This song is about someone close to me starting to lose themselves to drink and becoming something theyre not. i just wanted to see what anyone thinks about the lyrics. Cheers
x

Addiction

Verse 1
i wont find what i need, at the bottom of the bottle
hope come find me, im losing all direction
shallow independance, is quickly fading through
underneath it all, i feel im loosing you

Verse 2
dont expect me to hold you, up on my shoulders
theres weakness in me, bringing me to my knees
i cant understand ,all this loss in me
i cant seem to shake, this enemy

Chorus
well i cant get no sleep at all
i cant shake these demons
it feels like im starting to fall
falling through the seasons
im heading down

verse 3
its getting hard to sleep, with out my loving addiction
the shame and guilt it leaves, relieving all the tension
my eyes are burning red, flames wrapped around me
the devil owns my soul, and im so far from safety


Verse 4
why cant anyone else see, i need a helping hand
im destroying all i worked for, and crushing all my plans
theres nothing but remorse, running through my veins
i feel like im tied down, held by the devils reigns

Chorus
#2
Quote by Hennah
This song is about someone close to me starting to lose themselves to drink and becoming something theyre not. i just wanted to see what anyone thinks about the lyrics. Cheers
x

Addiction

Verse 1
i wont find what i need, at the bottom of the bottle
hope come find me, im losing all direction
shallow independance, is quickly fading through
underneath it all, i feel im loosing you
nice first line the whole stanza is good
Verse 2
dont expect me to hold you, up on my shoulders
theres weakness in me, bringing me to my knees
i cant understand ,all this loss in me
i cant seem to shake, this enemy
first line dosent really fit in...everything else is good
Chorus
well i cant get no sleep at all
i cant shake these demons
it feels like im starting to fall
falling through the seasons
im heading down
kind of a short verse but pretty good, falling through seasons is a little edgy but its good
verse 3
its getting hard to sleep, with out my loving addiction
the shame and guilt it leaves, relieving all the tension
my eyes are burning red, flames wrapped around me
the devil owns my soul, and im so far from safety
i like the first line the third and the fourth, the second doesent fit that much with this entire verse


Verse 4
why cant anyone else see, i need a helping hand
im destroying all i worked for, and crushing all my plans
theres nothing but remorse, running through my veins
i feel like im tied down, held by the devils reigns
nothing wrong with this verse...
Chorus

nice job man, c4c?