#1
a song, different from my sort but i wanted to try something different

gone out with a few of my friends
trying to make my way around the bends
and i dont know if ill ever be the same
ive been trying hard to get better at life
ive been trying hard to work and strife
but ill never be the same agaiaiaian

is this all im ever gonna be
sitting on a bench at half past three
kebab down my shirt and a pint in my hand
kicked out a club and i just cant believe
that im sitting here with my phone just watching
the screensaver as im hoping to see
that someone, just someone
will call me

making my way home just by myself
critically abusing my mental health
by drinking my self to death
im trying hard to get things right
im trying hard to make things right
but i just dont undertsand

is this all im ever gonna be
sitting on a bench at half past three
kebab down my shirt and a pint in my hand
kicked out a club and i just cant believe
that im sitting here with my phone just watching
the screensaver as im hoping to see
that someone, just someone
will call me

tell me what you think...5 minutes it took me not bad?
#4
Pretty typical lyrics, but I actually liked em. As Heat-13, work a little on the rhymes.