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Hey there, I'm new to the boards but have been writing music for about five years. I'm 21 and I've been playing guitar in a alternative band for about a year, here's one of our first songs I wrote. Let me know what you think, thanks!

Verse
Feel so locked in tonight
My head begins to fight
My heart begins to race
She wants this at slow pace

Never done this ever before
What should I be looking for
Her face, her hair, her looks
The way she carries her books

We've waited and waited
For so much time
Is this act overrated
Just want her to feel fine

Chorus
All my life sins have tempt me
No regrets, just feel so empty
Should I stop and take no risks
Risk everything I'll surely miss

Verse
Please take my hand tonight
And I'll make you feel alright
This bed, this couch, these sheets
Our love is all we need

After this I cannot promise
How much money I'll get
For this guitar is all I have
The road of fame, I'll find it

Chorus
All my life, sins have tempt me
No regrets just feel so empty
Should I stop and take no risks
Risk everything I'll surely miss