#1
its a real fast paced song i think you guys will enjoy it

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#2
I like your riffs a lot, but honestly it doesn't quite feel like a song. I think you should add some beats, you can make a drum track using Acoustica Beatcraft. When you tighten eveything up with a drum track, it would be easier for me to give a better crit. Your playing is obviously advanced.

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