#1
This is still in its first 'phase'

Say what you think of me
It does'nt really matter

Say what you'll think i'll be
I know your so faithless

Now i realise its my time
Your just a voice in my mind

[SAY, say what you want
Because i don't relly give a ****
If you don't give a ****] x2

Because im alright x4

Say how its my fault
And your so inoccent

Say how im the one
Who took you down

Now i realise its my time
Your just a voice in my mind

[SAY, say what you want
Because i don't relly give a ****
If you don't give a ****] x2

solo

Now i realise its my time
Your just a voice in my mind

[SAY, say what you want
Because i don't relly give a ****
If you don't give a ****] x2
The Merchant Of the Resident Evil Club
]

Quote by hminh87
What is that big hole at the neck joint for?


Quote by Hoodoo Child
the neck?
#2
Pretty good. But why repeat ''Because i'm alright'' Four times? I think two times will get the message across, maybe three but i think four times is definately too many. Good lyrics though .
Party
Pants
In
My
Come
Wanna
You?


Quote by M.B.MetalTabber
clothes, you don't want as much detail as emptybullet gave you now, do you?
#3
Quote by Empty_Bullet
Pretty good. But why repeat ''Because i'm alright'' Four times? I think two times will get the message across, maybe three but i think four times is definately too many. Good lyrics though .

It think that depends on the way you'll sing it. if it is fast, 4 times will be ok.

I think you need to add a few more lines to that...
Except that is a punk song... Nice try.

Mine is called Spent, fornt page