#1
I have been writing a song for the last couple of weeks and I would like to share it with you guys. To warn you now its one of those songs where you can see in the back ground solders coming home from war and hugging their famlies and corny stuff like that

TITLE : As long as it brings me back home

It goes ; As long as it brings me back home to you{ the you is held out}
I'll be sitting beside you the rest of your days
Watching like an angel over you
For ever and ever I'll be there;

Thats as far as i have gotten on it its played on an acustic but you can use an elec.
also its played mildly slow

Let me know if you add any words to it

the chords go

E G E
As long as it brings me back home to you{ the you is held out}
G A E
I'll be sitting beside you the rest of your days
G A E
Watching like an angel over you
G A E
For ever and ever I'll be there
Basicly the chords are
E
G
A

Its a fun song I hope you enjoy!!!
Last edited by andyflip92 at May 12, 2008,
#2
Three chords.

And....

I see you rhyme 'you' with 'you'.

And an 'angle' watches over people?
#3
throw in some sweeps, do a barrel roll while playing, and make a reference to icy hot some where in the song and the majority of uger's will believe you to be god.
Pretty please, with sugar on top, clean the f***ing car.
I love pulp...
Someone told me there's a girl out there
With love in her eyes and flowers in her hair...

I will find this girl.

#4
Quote by AA00P
Three chords.

And....

I see you rhyme 'you' with 'you'.

And an 'angle' watches over people?


welllllll sorrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyy I was just trying to write a basic song
Jezz
#5
i just noticed this, you literally just joined, my advice to you, if you want to avoid getting flamed like you will if you keep posting this garbage is lay low and read other's posts and see where they messed up before proceeding to post yourself.
Pretty please, with sugar on top, clean the f***ing car.
I love pulp...
Someone told me there's a girl out there
With love in her eyes and flowers in her hair...

I will find this girl.

#6
Quote by rockinsk8r91
i just noticed this, you literally just joined, my advice to you, if you want to avoid getting flamed like you will if you keep posting this garbage is lay low and read other's posts and see where they messed up before proceeding to post yourself.

listen to him, i think some of the members might feel like ripping their hair out when they looked at that.
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