#2
I liked the intro guitar, but I didn't liked how the bass started out, I would make it so it follows the guitar base notes ,at least until the strings kick in. The string are ok but at 11 there is a chord that sounds awkward to me.
I liked how the electric guitar kicked in, and the lead over the pre-chorus was nice too.
The chorus was good, with the background acoustic arpeggios and all but it was kind of weak (for a chorus), I thought the pre-chorus was the actual chorus when I first listened, but vocals can fix this.
The solo was nice but I think it would fit better as a fade out outro solo. Finally, I didn't like the beginning of the outro, I was kind of waiting for another chord after the chord at 103.
Overall is a great piece but some little adjustments can make it even better. good job!


Ps. the gp file has the extra chord at the beginning of the outro I was talking about earlier.
and...... Mind critting one of my songs? (choose from sig) Thanks.
Attachments:
Copy of Rock Ballad.zip
#3
Hey, thanks for takin' the time to look! I've taken on board your suggestions and it's soundin' good, thanks!
#4
Humm.

Well, as i listen it starts out pretty good, maybe a little..empty. try adding a cymbal here or there?

ok, this cord is driving me crazy. the second one in the 19th measure. its too sharp, something in there is a half step too high

other then a few things here and there that'd be a decent song with lyrics, nothing that would stand out, but nothing that would make you cringe o.O

crit one of mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=860289

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=860284

either ones ok,
(both is better:P)