I just learned to play this song today. I recorded this song on one track into garageband. Any feedback or critique is appreciated. I really want to know how i can improve this song. The song is in my profile.

click here to listen

alot of you probably haven't heard the song before but please crit anyway. Actually heres the link to Peter Katz's myspace and you can listen to the original there:
Peter's myspace
nothing to see here
Last edited by Seiko-Unleashed at May 13, 2008,