#1
Bored, found this list me and a couple friends made a long time ago, tell me what you think.

Who am I today?
Part of us, or Part of them?
Nobody today

What am I today?
A cog in the human race?
I'm broken today

When am I today?
The day before tomorrow?
I'm gone today

Where am I today?
In dark among the many?
I'm outside today

Why am I today?
There's no real reason to stay
I am Yesterday
#2
Today today today today today today today.

I think the uniqueness of haiku is to be able to say something powerful in only those 3 lines and 17 syllables. You've chosen to have so many of them be the same word, and really all of the haikus express something that should be able to be expressed in one.
#3
Quote by DorkusMalorkus
Today today today today today today today.

I think the uniqueness of haiku is to be able to say something powerful in only those 3 lines and 17 syllables. You've chosen to have so many of them be the same word, and really all of the haikus express something that should be able to be expressed in one.



Good point. we kinda wanted to keep the today thing going, but then that kinda defeats the purpose of haikus... thanks.