Hey everyone. Newbie here.

I have been reading everyone's poetry, and its terrific!

I am not that great, but I have been working on this one for awhile and I wanted to know what you think.

Thank you for your honest criticism good or bad.

Wiggle, Kick

Humpback thoughts in a humpback mind.
Never stop croaking until you croak.
Never fvck a stranger twice.
Money is green too.
So is urine.
If you don’t drink enough water.
So slimy I forget you’re there.
Slipped right out of my mind.
Squat is what you get when you are born.
Squat is what you leave.
Just a frog, sitting on a lilly pad.
Fat and full of tadpoles that resemble sperm.