#1
EDIT: Updated with more music!

Here's another new melodeath song, finished it all fairly quickly much like my last one. I was planning on it being a fair bit longer but it reached a logical ending at about 3 minutes. Crit for crit as usual, and the MP3 is on my profile for those of you without Guitar Pro.
Attachments:
Shrine Update.zip
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Hmm judging from your pic you'd fit in more with a fat busted tribute.
Last edited by duncang at May 25, 2008,
#2


The intro was nice and soothing, and sounded really good once the drums and bass came in. The melodies were absolutely awesome (That first one [@ bar 31] was my favorite part of the song). And the acoustics... That acoustic break was sooooo good. The drums and bass were also well executed throughout.

All around, awesome job. I really like that its very reminiscent of Insomnium (without sounding too similar to them...).
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Last edited by Burning_Angel at May 13, 2008,
#4
Jesus ****in' christ. This is my favourite piece i have seen on UG. I love everything about it. Incredible. 5*
Sweet.
#6
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i liked it, even thoug it was very melodic.
the intro was kind of empty..
the rest is good. verey good. really. :'D
there's not much wrong with it..
9.5/10.

crit mine?


You say it's melodic like that's a bad thing
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im more of a social godzilla than chameleon

Quote by MetalMessiah665
Alright, I'll give them a try, Japanese Black Speed rarely disappoints.

Quote by azzemojo
Hmm judging from your pic you'd fit in more with a fat busted tribute.
#8
O.O'

that was Really good.

you better record this.

or i'll rip out your jugular.


the only thin i can think of saying is that the intro was screaming for a solo, but thats just an opinion.

its extremely good as is.

9.8/10
#9
Very nice, duncan.
Get baked, study theory.

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#10
Bump for update.
Quote by justinb904
im more of a social godzilla than chameleon

Quote by MetalMessiah665
Alright, I'll give them a try, Japanese Black Speed rarely disappoints.

Quote by azzemojo
Hmm judging from your pic you'd fit in more with a fat busted tribute.
#11
Song was really good. It felt a bit predictable at some points but nevertheless really good. The acoustic part later on that had the same melody played distorted straight after was really awesome, love that mute going on.
#12
excellent song. i really did enjoy it. insomniumish for sure, but thats a good thing! awesome stuff.