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influences: Siouxsie and the Banshees, Joy Division, maybe a little bit of Richard Hell.

[unfinished]

Oh you can look
but you can never touch,
but what she said
never meant too much to me
oh but what you did
don't you know it's a sin
but you keep touching it
again and again

Oh you can take,
but not too much,
but what she bought,
was such a deadly cost to me.
Oh but what you did
don't you know it's a sin
you took the love of
a less than valuable friend.

It's all too much
it's all too much
it's all too much
too much, too much for me.

The looking glass burns a hole in my brain.


You can drink
but not too much
she's not drowning,
she's just sizing up to me.
and what she did,
don't you know it's a sin
but shes far to gone to
try it again.

You can die
but not too much.
All the stains on my shirt
well, they are death to me.
and what I did, don't you know it's a sin.
I took the life of a less than loveable friend.

It's all too much
it's all too much
it's all too much
too much, too much for me.

My brains burning in a broken ash tray.
#2
Oh you can look
but you can never touch,
but what she said
never meant too much to me
oh but what you did
don't you know it's a sin
but you keep touching it
again and again

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I see this as

..
never meant much
what you did
it's such a sin
you touch it
over and again
_________________
Oh you can take,
but not too much,
but what she bought,
was such a deadly cost to me.
Oh but what you did
don't you know it's a sin
you took the love of
a less than valuable friend.

_________________________
this one, maybe..:

(Oh) you can take
not too much
what she bought
was the highest cost
what you did
it's such a sin
took the love
of your former friend
________________

T
he looking glass burns a hole in my brain.


maybe:
the looking glass it burns holes through me
______________________________

You can drink
but not too much
she's not drowning,
she's just sizing up to me.
and what she did,
don't you know it's a sin
but shes far to gone to
try it again.

_________________
maybe:
drink it down
not too much
she doesn't drown
she just sizes me up
what she did
it's such a sin
but she's far too gone
to stop again
_____________

or what not. just some suggestions . but, pretty good