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Ok guys, i was tryin to sleep one night, and i had this idea for a song, and i was kinda pissed off at religion, and how currupt it is. now im not totally against religion, cause i do belive in god, its just i think the churches are weak. but yea plz crit!

You came to save, they went to pray
why aren't you here to save the day....

(screamed) Shrouding Viel!

To dark to ever see
wait.. i thought you loved me?

LIFE COME TO END!

(chorus)
You fight the bull you catch the horns, as i beat your crown of thorns
How holy are you now?
Not till i see you on the ground
I'll turn your whole world upside down!
Come on tellt he truth, were dying in the name of you!

You cast your shadow down on me...cut...
you'll see i bleed
staind cross on the hill
that holy name you must forfill.

I'll wash my hands in your sin
wanting the burning to come to an end
All hate in the name of you
i'm done with this & and done with you!!!

War and hate, whats the cause
human nature has its flaws
follow blindly into death
DARKNESS OR LIGHT!!
STAND AND FIGHT!!
SACRIFICE!!!
(We are) The anti-cancer
(We are) The only answer
Stripped down, we want you dead
But what's inside of me, you'll never know
(We are) Bipolar gods
(We are) You know what we are
#2
come on guys plz crit
(We are) The anti-cancer
(We are) The only answer
Stripped down, we want you dead
But what's inside of me, you'll never know
(We are) Bipolar gods
(We are) You know what we are
#3
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You gave others crits. That's good.
You should have just been patient and waited for them to get back to you.
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