Here's a song I'm working on:
"You seethe
And blame me
And everyone
For your self inflicted pain
You say I have an ulterior motive
With nothing to gain
And its so obvious
I ask why blame me
For your self inflicted pain
When the lights blink out
And the floor falls through
You still blame us
Though you know its no ones fault,
But your own
You're blaming us
Though it's self inflicted"
I need some help changing some words to ryhme better without changing the song too much. And I posted this on another forum and they said something about the song structure...