#2
-I like the whispers but they could possibly benefit from some more processing and effects to really just space things out even further
-The guitar tone works well
-The wierd noise changing between the intro and the cleaner guitar+vocal part seems to come at slightly the wrong time, it through me off for some reason.

Otherwise this is tight, good job.
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#3
Well, I wouldn't definitely call this trance. It lacks pretty much all the elements that define trance. Anyhow, I like this. It's pretty weird but in a good listenable way. Everything works well and the song sounds damn tight in overall. Good stuff and thanks for the comment on my song.
#4
Quote by Nic Play Guitar
-I like the whispers but they could possibly benefit from some more processing and effects to really just space things out even further
-The guitar tone works well
-The wierd noise changing between the intro and the cleaner guitar+vocal part seems to come at slightly the wrong time, it through me off for some reason.

Otherwise this is tight, good job.


Quote by Stratwizard
Well, I wouldn't definitely call this trance. It lacks pretty much all the elements that define trance. Anyhow, I like this. It's pretty weird but in a good listenable way. Everything works well and the song sounds damn tight in overall. Good stuff and thanks for the comment on my song.

I can feel some of the criticisms, I know. I'm going to work on the transitions and effects so that it works more closely with the rhythm. I'm glad that people have found it listenable so far, though.
#5
Intro reminds me of pink floyd then goes into a type of rap like beat. The guitar holding that one note sounds kinda wierd at like 2 - 3 min Id rather it be doing something. Dont really like the tone of the lead at the end but thats just me.
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