#2
-It takes too long to build up in to anything
-There's a few timing glitches
-The guitar tones are horrible
-You have a few good ideas here and there, but you need to practice to get tighter
-A lot of it sounds more classic rock than power metal

I like some of the basic ideas but your technical ability lets you down.

C4C my cheesy pop song?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=860454
Too much gain = Ears in pain
#4
Quote by Nic Play Guitar
-It takes too long to build up in to anything
-There's a few timing glitches
-The guitar tones are horrible
-You have a few good ideas here and there, but you need to practice to get tighter
-A lot of it sounds more classic rock than power metal

I like some of the basic ideas but your technical ability lets you down.

C4C my cheesy pop song?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=860454

yeah, there's a reason i stick with rhythm guitar, someday i'll get my friend to redo it and it'll sound better
the reason the tone sucks is the mic... or so i'll claim until i die!
#5
Lol
*Playing song... messes up horribly, looks around*
"This amp sucks..." O.o

Lol, I do that all the time
#6
Mm..It was good, took along time to build up..Uncommon in the power metal i listen to.
the ideas were good, and the feel you got for it. but work on the techniques, and just build off it. keep it up.
c4c?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=861219
The gear.
Schecter S1 Diamond series.
ESP NV.
Randall G3 200W
Dunlop cry-baby wah (finally)
Line 6 spider III 15x (Small but deadly)
#7
the part after about 1 minute when it picks up is pretty cool. you should do something that is like that all the way through

c4c?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=859702
Originally posted by primusfan
When you crank up the gain to 10 and switch to the lead channel, it actually sounds like you are unjustifiably bombing an innocent foreign land.


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#8
i liked it after the one minute mark, to be honest, everything before that sucks
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