#2
First of all, please take that flanger off of your guitar. Its pretty annoying. Tone other than that is ok. Timing is pretty good, and the fills were too. Theres a few timing mistakes here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed. I heard the few mistakes on the solo, but other than those 2 parts I liked it. You did the song justice. How long have you been playing?
#3
yeah, all you have to work on is pretty much some bends and timing in the solo. otherwise, it sounds great! how long have you been playing for?
#4
yeah thanks for the advice i have been playing off and on for around 4 years