The music and sound of the vocals are great, but the lyrics blow. Otherwsie it sounds fine.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
Its pretty good. It reminds me a lot of "...and out come the wolves." era Rancid. I think it could use some hooks though, but that's just personal preference. I think the recording quality is good for home recording. Good work. (I have a similar thing going at the moment )
If music was the food of love I'd be a fat romantic slob.