It's pretty good. A little sloppy but i can tell you're feeling it.
Keep at it.

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Haha thanks for the advice =D
any expanision on sloppy? as in advice wise

For me, there were a couple of timing issues. Where like...you'd skip on a chord, or one of the guitars would be slightly off of the other.

There was also some excess noise.
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