#1
Gah im kinda embarassed for postin this, singing is not my forte, but whatever. i'm more interested in what you guys think of the guitar/piana parts. The song is "It's Been too long" on my profile. As usual the audio is kinda whacked, so turn up the volumes on you computerzz

crit for crit ^-^
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#3
no kidding! mebbe i shoulda left out the vocals and just let you guys listen to the instrumental ahah, but what did you think of the guitar/piano jamba?
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#5
Instruments sound pretty good, the song flows quite well.
And for your singing, I think if you worked on it it would help alot; just before each line fill you lungs(well technically breath from your diaphragm) and put more force behind your singing. Combine that with concentrating on controlling your voice into the notes you want - i think you could benefit from gaining more control.
#6
put a little more balls into your singing. i mean that in the nicest way possible. be loud and proud, no matter how nervous you really are, hah.

its not a bad song man. just please let the volume be louder next time :P
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#7
Thanks guys for the crit's, i fixed up the volume a bit, and beefed up the guitar solo and added a half decent ending
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