#1
Okay, this is my first original song on UG. Its still a rough version (sans lyrics), and the melody is very quiet in the beginning. But tell me what you think (i usually write gloomy, Radiohead-esque songs, so this one isn't typical of me :P). in profile.
IN/ RAINBOWS
IN RAIN/BOWS
IN RAINBOW/S
IN RAINBOWS/
IN RAIN_BOWS
RA D IOHEA _D
_RAD IO HEA D
#3
Has a nice Caribbean feel to it, very nice. I like the way you set the beat up in the beginning.
#4
Good job, I really liked the vibe of the song, it put me in a good mood. I also like the jazziness of it. At some points it sounded like it was missing a lead though, and I think it could be even better if you added a riff to some of the more chord-oriented parts. Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=14324355#post14324355