#1
Its not finished, but c4c anywho.


Ive said it once before,
Ill say it once again.
These fickle games your playing,
are ****ing with my head

So kiss the stars,
Ill grab the knife
And place it where your secrets lie.
Then we will fall between the hours,
and find time running slowly sour.
Last edited by Smoothrider_41 at May 19, 2008,
#3
Yea, the flow is the best bit of this piece. Its so easy to read and understand instantly, but at the same time its not overly obvious or poignant. Its just right! Not majorly keen on the title though to be honest mate.