#1
It can't win...
Written By: Andrew Sherman

Intro:
Here comes the blackness
The sun is gone
Where did it go?
No one knows!
Everything will die!

Verse 1:
When darkness shadows the land
You better fight!
Or death will claim you before you can cry out
Before you even notice it’s coming

Everything will be lost
Unless you can stand against it

You better hope you can…
You better hope you can!

Pre-Chorus
You better fight!
You better fight!
You better fight!
You better fight!

Chorus:
Here it comes
The black, the dark
The hell!

You fight!
If you don’t do either..
You die!

The Sun, the Moon,
Gone!
Darkness is here!

Killing your self is a better option
Than letting it get you
Don’t let it get you!

Pre-Verse:
We fight the last battle
The Light versus the Shadow
If the Light loses
Your dead!

Verse 2:
Men fight desperately
Trying to hold it back
It’s over taking them!
Don’t let the darkness win!

Don’t let all you worked for be gone!
Stand against it!

Don’t fall back…
Don’t fall back!

Pre-Chorus
You better fight!
You better fight!
You better fight!
You better fight!

Chorus:
Here it comes
The black, the dark
The hell!

You fight!
If you don’t do either..
You die!

The sun, the moon,
Gone!
Darkness is here!

Killing your self is a better option
Than letting it get you
Don’t let it get you!

Pre-Verse
We fight the last battle
The Light versus the Shadow
If the Light loses
Your Dead!

Verse 3:
All is being destroyed
Is the Shadow winning?
You better hope not!
Don’t let it win!

Hope the Shadow falters!
Let the Light win!

Make it falter…
Make it falter!

Outro:
We’re pushing it back
It seems to falter
Will this be the last battle?
Oh, it better be!
The Shadow cannot win!
Or we’re done for good!

You better rejoice!
You better rejoice!
You better rejoice!
You better rejoice!

The Light is back
The sun, the Light
The great!

You won!
Your life is back
You live!

The sun, the moon,
Back!
The Light has come!

Living is now an option
It can’t get you anymore
There’s no way!

It's a metal song
(please crit)
#4
Quote by jesseOsauchelli
it sounds very emo but if u put a pink floyd style to it ,it would sound cool and deep


emo? really?
#8
Quote by The daltonator
unless it was a hardore ,
cool riff ,screamo song


i think it'd be better as metal
#9
Quote by andy331
it'd be nice if you could tell me why....

you just need to get more deep.
im not tryin to bag on you lol
#11
Quote by The daltonator
well maybe if you did a Pantera metal
that'd be sick


yes it would thanks for the idea
#12
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