#1
Well after failing at song writing i decided to try my luck at writing a solo. I used quite a bit of licks in this solo. C4C.
Attachments:
Solo.zip
#2
Personally, I think you dude a nice job. It was pretty tasteful, but it could have used more pauses and bends and stuff.
I really liked the descending sections like in bar 11; I think if you were to add a harmony in there with it, it would make it stand out more.
My only complaint really is bars 25-27. It fits the song, but there's just something about it that I don't like.
Good job, man.

Crit mine, please?
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=864095
It all makes sense
We're capable of beauty
Through sounds that make on cringe
The dogs only hear us now

#3
Thx alot spar. I was really hoping to get some good crit. This is my first solo that i have actually tried on. And yeh it could have used more bends.
#4
this is just the solo from your other song without the rest of the song.

...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
#5
Quote by Its_Rock77
this is just the solo from your other song without the rest of the song.



I posted this before the entire song. First i made this solo. Then after starting my other song i decided to add this as the outro.
#6
oh I see. sorry.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...