here is a song i wrote about my girlfriend

its only a short poem really, hope you can guide me in the right direction to make it better.

anyways here it is:

And untill, the sky melts and bleeds away
You will be, in my heart
And there to stay…
Through the cold
Dark and frightening times, when despair seems
As if it will prevail..
Ill have a picture stuck in my mind
Of your gorgeous smile.

Never ever, will I find a girl the same as you
No one will smile, giggle and kiss me like you do!
Every day I fall more for you
With every second that passes
I feel as if im living for you…