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The first song i have ever written, but don't make that a reason to be easy on me. Please Crit this as much as you all can because i really wanna know how it is and what could make it better.


Tonight he walks all alone.
Caught in the dull moonlight,
Sand and water run between his toes
As he hides the tears away.
Love is but a simple word,
Meanings far too great to share.
People watch him as he walks away,
Not knowing what to do.

And now he prays to god
Hoping to ease the pain.
Dreaming of her at night
Yearning for the light
But when he looks around
She is right here in his arms

And as he looks into the waves
All he can see is her and she is all he needs….

And now he prays to god
Hoping to ease the pain.
He dreams of her at night
Yearning for The light
But when he looks around
She is right here in his arms


The angels flap there wings
As the stars begin to shine.
He holds his head high,
A soft kiss awaits.
Looking in her eyes
Not knowing what he sees
I think the time has come
For a happy ending.

And how he begs God
For all the pain to end.
Dreaming of her
Walking in the light
Ooh but when he looks around
She is all he sees.
She is all he sees.
She is in his arms.