#1
Hey guys, I have a biology project where i had to pick a world issue and do a report about it, and follow up the report with a presentation, the teacher said i could write a song so i decided to do just that, i wrote a few lines and wanted to know what you thought of it

What do they say about,
Nuclear testing?
Well, I don’t doubt,
In the future we’re investing.
They blow the bomb above the waste-land,
And even mutate all of our sand
Why do we need all this destruction
Death and chaos, with no emotion

Chorus

BOOM! GLOOM!
Never ending thoughts of doom.
HEY! YOU!
For me your life is past due.
NO! WAY!
Your land will slowly decay.

Verse 2

It’s completely global,
A change is needed
Not another Chernobyl,
Before the death toll is exceeded.


Its obviously not finished, but any feedback would be great.
#3
it's really good for like a school song/ make a point


like catchy rhyming makes sure the point is made


i rekon the music should be very power punk-esq

but yea you could easily write for Greenday, they think they have something to say
#5
yeah, when i wrote the chorus i was kinda thinking of leper messiah, when it goes "CHAIN CHAIN join the endless chain" in the verse, i think that would sound cool

Yeah i will probably be recording
#7
Try Rust In Peace... Polaris by Megadeth. Great song about nukes.

NOTHING HURTS BATMAN!

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#8
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Hey guys, I have a biology project where i had to pick a world issue and do a report about it, and follow up the report with a presentation, the teacher said i could write a song so i decided to do just that, i wrote a few lines and wanted to know what you thought of it

What do they say about,
Nuclear testing?
Well, I don’t doubt,
In the future we’re investing.
They blow the bomb above the waste-land,
And even mutate all of our sand
Why do we need all this destruction
Death and chaos, with no emotion

Chorus

BOOM! GLOOM!
Never ending thoughts of doom.
HEY! YOU!
For me your life is past due.
NO! WAY!
Your land will slowly decay.

Verse 2

It’s completely global,
A change is needed
Not another Chernobyl,
Before the death toll is exceeded.


Its obviously not finished, but any feedback would be great.



I don't get it. Are you against nuclear weapons or power?
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