#1
Here`s what boredom in biology class brought to the world today hope you like it

Dreamless man.

one man,denied of dreams
nothing inside.
Stripped from pride,
he roams in hell
Hell on earth
The devil - his best friend.

Chorus
Roam,roam dreamless man
dont try to end your hate
for its the only thing in you.

If he dies nothing awaits him
god dosent have a place for him
The devil dosent want him.

Chorus
Roam,roam dreamless man
dont try to end your hate
for its the only thing in you.

Roam,roam dreamless one,
roam this hell
for its the only thing you can do.
You can't die.You can't feel.
only hate is what you need.
take it,embrace it and then you may
to real hell the way to dwell.

Crit and give opinions thanks
#2
Hey man it's alright, but read the rules regarding to titles, you have to have the name of your piece as the title, not "My first lyrics."

*Reported* so its closed and you can repost with the correct title, you'll get better responses that way man.