#2
The music is really nice, but your voice doesn't match the music.. it's in the front, music in the back, it's too direct, but still nice though, good quality!
#3
listening while i type.
Cool guitar melody, vocals are really prominent though. the chorus is pretty cool. Like the guitar tone. Theres a few weird vocal moments.
But in the quiet down, the drums are really cool. I like the feel now. Reminds me of some 90's grunge.

Pretty tight man. Like the progression in the chorus. But as said. work on the levels, and some of the rough vocal patches. Well done.

cfc? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=14290864#post14290864

thanks, later man
#4
Thanks for the input. I just uploaded a new one with better levels and some EQ. I need to re-record the vocals at the end of the third verse, any other parts that particularly stood out? Let me know what you think of the new one.

Im going to crit yours now nickm, canucks do you want me to crit anything?